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    Exclamation Sharing for school

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    I am currently in photography school and would love some feedback. For our assignments this time we had to do three pics.

    1- leading lines

    _DSC0052-Edit by TLTP2011, on Flickr

    2- framing

    SJS_1850-Edit-2 by TLTP2011, on Flickr




    3- having subject large and off-center


    SJS_0547 by TLTP2011, on Flickr
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    Gorgeous photos!! The Venetian mask one is incredible fabulous.

    I think you did a great job. The only critique, if any, is on the first photo. I don't like the plaque in the upper right corner, and I scrolled down so that it wasn't in the picture and I liked it better that way. IMHO, the plaque draws your attention to it and away from the lines.
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    Thank you! As far as the plaque in the corner, I tried cropping it out but it takes off the top of the door frame and I feel like the whole frame needs to be there.

    I appreciate the tip! I rather hear it here than from the instructor!

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