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    Navy Poem

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    Ok so DB is at OCS so I will not be with him for Valentine's Day but he graduates March 2 soooo I will see him them. Anyways for V day I am writing him a poem and having it eched in glass by a picture of us...This is what I have so far and was wondering what ya'll think. Please feel free to add to what I have or offer suggestions!!! Thanks


    There will be times when the Navy will take you away from me
    Times where you will have sail out to sea
    In these times, I will miss you dearly and long to have you near me
    My heart will sail away with you every time you leave me
    When you’re out at sea, surrounded by blue I hope this brings comfort to you
    My love for you is like the salt in the sea
    Always present and impossible to measure
    My love for you is as true as the sea is blue [/CENTER]

    do ya'll like this one better?!?!?!?

    Just as the tides come and go
    The Navy will take you away from me
    There’ll be times you’ll have to sail out to sea
    I will miss you dearly and long to have you near me
    My heart will sail away with you every time you leave
    And skip a beat with the thought of the hello that’s to be
    Whether near or far my love for you will always be true
    You are the rip current that’s swept me away
    My love for you is like the salt in the sea
    Always present and impossible to measure
    Forever and Always, You and Me
    Last edited by NavyBJC; 01-02-2012 at 11:08 PM. Reason: updating poem
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    With every second that passes I will be missing you
    I will always stand by you and support what you do
    You are my hero and a dream come true.
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    when the ocean turns a funny green
    know that I love you and I'll never be mean

    when the sea turns stormy and grey
    know that I love you more and more each day

    when the sea is rough and full of foam
    it means one more day you are closer to home
    "You miss 100% of the shots you don't make" Wayne Gretzky
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    just a personal thing - I wouldn't have his name or rank there.

    I know we are all on the same team here on MSOS but you never know who else might be perving on us.
    "You miss 100% of the shots you don't make" Wayne Gretzky
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    very sweet poem
    "True love doesn't mean being inseparable; it means being separated and nothing changes."

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    Nice job! I like it!



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